Wednesday, November 24, 2010

The Black and Blue Monster

I walked into the sunroom and there crawling on the wall was a blue and black spider! I was scared so I told Macy.
" Macy, I saw a big spider."
"No you didn't Trampus. Don't tell lies."
"I did."
"Go away Trampus."
Macy wasn't going to believe me so I ran away. "Mum, Mum I saw a big spider."
"Rubbish," said Mum. If no one will believe me I will stay out of the sunroom!

By Trampus

3 comments:

Riley A said...

You put great describing words.

Kimberly Nicole said...

I think that was a great stroy Trampus.I think that will be a year 4 storoy and a room 5 story writing.

Joe said...

That is a great story Trampus. You
are fantastik at your writing.