The Amazing Bouncing EggExcitedly we raced outside. Trent went to get Mr Carroll. Alex came too. Alex dropped the egg. It bounced. "Yay!" said Mrs Wright. "Do it again Alex," said Damien. "Do it higher this time." Alex dropped it. Splat went the egg!
By Tyla
The Bounce and Crack
We ran outside. Lots of people didn't show respect because they were all pushing to get outside to see the bouncing egg. We sat down in a circle. Mr Carroll came too because he didn't believe that the egg would bounce. Alex picked up the egg and... it bounced."Do it again Alex" said Mrs Wright. So Alex did it again and... SPLAAAAT! "That's the end of the egg," I said. We went back inside.
By Jessica
2 comments:
Wow there are some fantastic descriptive words in those stories girls! Well done and keep up the great work Room 9!!!
It must of been a big SPLAT! Clever clever clever. Great work. It must of tooken a long time for you to write.
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